Score: 10

"Review"

submission: asdfmovie

date: August 11, 2008

Short one. I honestly think that you could make a competiotion to Egoraptor if you make several ones. No need colour them but some shade would be nice so that random blamers will see you "put some effort into it". Asdfg!

Score: 9

"Pure awesomeoness"

submission: Mindy Learns a Moral

date: August 7, 2008

Reminded me something between Barbie Girl and Dexter's Laboratory. A pure classic. Work on the voice acting just a tad lil bit :)

story just killed me :)
humour was just like "Oh come on, you're not gonna cry at that phone...right?"
xD

Anyway, I watched it all and can't wait for part 2. Or perhaps a larger collection :o

Score: 9

"Review"

submission: Do you have a waffle

date: August 2, 2008

Small sound-mouth desynchronisation when the big waffle talks to the kid(he moves his mouth even if he didn't sing. Noticed that at the 30th bit.

Otherwise Pure waffle awesomeness.

Score: 10

"Review"

submission: Angry Dog - Blood Shower

date: August 2, 2008

Cool. My minor request : Subs please. The voices weren't always so understandable(Most of newgrounders are foreigners you know =P)

The rest is awesome =)

Score: 7

"Pretty nice"

submission: Pandemic II

date: July 20, 2008

But there is a very annoying bug.

If you don't start in Madagascar but somewhere else, there is a very low to no chance to get it infected. I tried it around 10 times, with different approaches and a lot of time and indepth strategy, but it just won't. That's -1

The borders really annoy me. the whole Caribbean is called Cuba. The northern and most of the eastern part is called Peru. Mexico has all the central american countries. Eastern Europe's borders are innaccurate. There's no corsica, while there is sardinia. Sicily is merged with Italy. You could seperate Indochina from China, and Scandinavia from Eastern Europe. -2 for that one.

The rest is excellent and well-made.

Score: 8

"Review"

submission: Little Fighter Alpha Ch.9

date: July 19, 2008

I review this simply because I see you reply to almost everyone, if not everyone.

I watched all 9 parts. A rapid development around 7-9.
I also noticed there's no mr werk werk here.

I'll write suggestions, first ones that come to my mind:

The music (at least in the last parts, i think this one too) is nice, however whenever it stops, it stops all out of sudden. It just stops. It should slowly stop, as in the volume should reduce itself over a period of 5 seconds or so.

As a past player of LF(I loved freeze the most) I can say that It might be hard to do something better. However, I think the graphics needs polishing. You should not limit yourself to LF sprites only. Try to get some fancy explosions, fireworks. Some eyecandy. Something to make the fellow watching go "whaaat 0_O Pwnz"

A lot of people probably complained about the speed of the whole thing, so you made it quick here. No problem here. The thing is that it goes too fast and too many scenes of battle to enjoy. Usually there should be only 1 plan of battles(well, unless It's a war battle like before then that's acceptable or even recommended). It would be easier for you. Instead of a few quick battles at the same time, try to reach this:
Example, you have 3 battles.
Screen on 1 battle. Passes on to second, passes on to third.
If you want it more difficult, you could make them mix between each other sometimes, like one duel affected by another. The viewer will have this illusion that 3 battles are happening but actually the "camera" stays on just one of them. If that 1 will be spectacular, the viewer would think something like "the others must be kickass too" . It sounds like psychology but it works =)
E.g You have freeze vs Woody and that ex-Sasuke fellow vs the archer. In reality those fellows would fight 2vs2 , but in movies like this people always go 1vs1. If it's 1vs1 It's much easier to focus on eyecandy and special effects.

ANother graphics advice is to give more blood. You could even achieve some fun effects such as there are in Mugens.

Well that would be it. =)

Score: 4

"Review"

submission: Metal Gear Funnies

date: July 8, 2008

The last one was good. the rest was crap. Sorry. 4/10 , 2/5
Graphics, humour, sound, originality - almost none of those had that. Sorry.

Score: 10

"hey!"

submission: Owls

date: June 19, 2008

You should seriously go to British got talent show with THIS :D! It's gonna kick ass :D

Score: 10

"Review(!)"

submission: 2 - The Story of Khale

date: May 10, 2008

WTFFFFFFFFFFF.... 10/10.
No complaints at all. 10/10. No doubts about that.

The voice acting of the main character is kinda weird tho. Is this a story told by him matured? Or someone else...?

Truly. If you had a few hundred under your command you would've made some serious money. The kids would just love it.

Score: 8

"Review"

submission: The Chicken Rodeo

date: May 10, 2008

Ok. Starting from the bad. To the good ones.

This thing lacked sound. the music from time to time and occasional sounds just sounded awkward. Try recording the usual sounds at home. It shouldnt be hard.
Second thing that this flash needs is smoothness. At times characters looked as if they were robots. Or weird freaks floating over the floor.

Now the good stuff.
The graphics were impressive. Very cartoon-like. You kinda mixed up today with the 50's.(60's?)
The story was brilliant. It shows you that you care for your loved one at all times. It had a really slow pace though, because of it's smoothness(this movie couldve been 7 minutes and it wouldve been better)

Solid 8/10. and 5/5. Gl on future flashes.